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summer_jackel) wrote2011-04-20 06:33 pm
summer_jackel) wrote2011-04-20 06:33 pm
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Three more lines about ducks
One mallard flies across a gray morning sky;
that evening, a bufflehead bobs lightly
between slate waves and darkness.
...can you write a poem about a bufflehead and have it taken seriously? I could make it a goldeneye, but the duck in my head is a bufflehead and it doesn't seem right to change it. They are serious small ducks; respect them.
Today was obnoxious, but hey, ducks.
that evening, a bufflehead bobs lightly
between slate waves and darkness.
...can you write a poem about a bufflehead and have it taken seriously? I could make it a goldeneye, but the duck in my head is a bufflehead and it doesn't seem right to change it. They are serious small ducks; respect them.
Today was obnoxious, but hey, ducks.