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summer_jackel ([personal profile] summer_jackel) wrote2010-04-01 07:58 am
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Opening invocation/four coyotes begin to howl

Gray and Black and Red and White
Sing the day and seize the night

Black and Red and White and Gray
run through night and swallow day



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Thus begins NaPoWriMo; yes, some of them will be longer/whatever than the above, but I make no promises that most of them won't be three lines about ducks.

Also, Happy Birthday, Bliss like Yearling! My pretty blue April Fool will get a walk and a bath today.

[identity profile] troubleagain.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I like it! And I'm looking forward to the three lines about ducks.

Happy Birthday Bliss Like Snoutage!

[identity profile] furtech.livejournal.com 2010-04-01 04:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Love the poem-- I particularly love the brevity and power in those few words. Describes coyotes perfectly (only crit: you might want to spell grey/gray the same way both times, unless that was specific).

My pretty blue April Fool will get a walk and a bath today.

'Tis a cruel trick to play on the boy!
Edited 2010-04-01 16:13 (UTC)