First Bite
Nov. 12th, 2008 08:10 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
This isn't adult-filtered, but probably NWS in the full-screen version, unless you have a really cool workplace. An important moment for Danielle and Shard. Your eyes shine so.

http://us-p.vclart.net/vcl/Artists/Jackel/Sketches/First-Bite-1.2.jpg

What do you think of this style, seriously? These two are pretty rough, though I was enjoying leaving them that way. I ask because I'm extremely tempted to do 'Bone Shard' like this, in pencil and greyscale watercolors. I'd clean them up a little more for the actual story, but I am really enjoying the moody watercolor thing. Are y'all interested in reading (a lot) more story in this style?
on FA: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1707017/ and http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1707021/

http://us-p.vclart.net/vcl/Artists/Jackel/Sketches/First-Bite-1.2.jpg

What do you think of this style, seriously? These two are pretty rough, though I was enjoying leaving them that way. I ask because I'm extremely tempted to do 'Bone Shard' like this, in pencil and greyscale watercolors. I'd clean them up a little more for the actual story, but I am really enjoying the moody watercolor thing. Are y'all interested in reading (a lot) more story in this style?
on FA: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1707017/ and http://www.furaffinity.net/view/1707021/
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Date: 2008-11-12 05:29 pm (UTC)I think the style works, for this moment, at least. For the whole comic, maybe not, but you might be able to push more contrast for scenes that demanded it.
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Date: 2008-11-13 04:11 am (UTC)There will be more of Danielle and Shard very soon. I have decided to go with the greytone washes, but in areas that require a more detailed and specific style, I will do a 'cleaner' art. I think it will all hang together.