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Birds
If you were a bird, I think you would be
among the small, light perchers,
fleet and wary-eyed, half-hidden in the brambles.
Perhaps here and there flashing a shock of immoderate color,
red or blue or yellow blazing from your back, your breast,
beneath your wing.
Quick little ache of unexpected beauty.
If I was a bird, I think I would like to be a duck.
Although I would always envy the osprey’s mad grace;
at home in shallow waters, dabbling my bill in soft mud
with the sun mottling sleek, oiled feathers.
The water cold and perfect and delicious all around me.
Ducks are happy.
Their deaths quick, their lives full of moving rivers
Brief explosions of flight and web-footed, dirty joy.
Leave me amongst the weeds and bugs and rushes
With songbirds flitting in the branches all around.
If you were a bird, I think you would be
among the small, light perchers,
fleet and wary-eyed, half-hidden in the brambles.
Perhaps here and there flashing a shock of immoderate color,
red or blue or yellow blazing from your back, your breast,
beneath your wing.
Quick little ache of unexpected beauty.
If I was a bird, I think I would like to be a duck.
Although I would always envy the osprey’s mad grace;
at home in shallow waters, dabbling my bill in soft mud
with the sun mottling sleek, oiled feathers.
The water cold and perfect and delicious all around me.
Ducks are happy.
Their deaths quick, their lives full of moving rivers
Brief explosions of flight and web-footed, dirty joy.
Leave me amongst the weeds and bugs and rushes
With songbirds flitting in the branches all around.
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Date: 2009-04-03 10:53 pm (UTC)I have to admit that this was a favorite of mine, too. Quack!
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Date: 2009-04-04 12:29 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-04 01:09 am (UTC)Your swan card is, I think, my favorite one in the Pathfinders deck. I was sad that it didn't come with all of the great background info you had on your FA posting of the piece; I loved that and was hoping that every animal in the deck had a similar writeup.
But yeah, when I'm happy, I'm often waterfowl.
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Date: 2009-04-05 09:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-04-05 06:04 pm (UTC)...and now I'm feeling the need to get off my tail and put some work into that Tarot deck I started a couple years ago.
I love Sayh's panduck. and your swandog, of course...omg, seriously 'unique' gryphons that work so well. I keep meaning to draw them. I've not decided if my "duck self" is a mallard or a common merganser, but ducky, certainly---and a strongly non-predatory bird, which I rather need to balance the Coyote. Nonetheless, the osprey always hold my eye.
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Date: 2009-04-05 12:25 am (UTC)It's a beatiful poem, though if I ended up choosing, I'd probably choose to be a heron or an egret.
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Date: 2009-04-05 06:09 pm (UTC)I think that herons and egrets are amazing birds, too. Something about ducks I just resonate to, somehow.