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Little rooster who crowed this morning
before I stroked you until you calmed
and slit your throat.
Plucked, dressed, iced
I will anoint you in oil and rosemary
this afternoon, and eat you
for a late lunch.
You will be part of me
in a very literal and non-poetic way.

And I will miss you.
Your pride and beauty, your clean feathers and shining eye.
For all the chickens I have eaten and never knew,
the memory of your morning call proclaims:
Love what you must kill;
kill only what you love.

Date: 2010-04-14 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kynekh-amagire.livejournal.com
1. That's lovely. Ties rather neatly into the love-like-leopards-eat-your-brains metaphor, too.

2. Also, delicious.

Date: 2010-04-14 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mulefoot.livejournal.com
This evokes memories from childhood...some powerful farm memories.

Ashame the rooster had to crow his last but at least he will fill your belly and give you one last smile.

Date: 2010-04-15 02:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stoda.livejournal.com
Yep... one of those things about chickens.

Though I never was really able to slit bird-throats very effectively... the feathers were always awfully good armor against slicing motions. Axes, however... very effective.

Nicely evocative piece.

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